A poem. Noncrab related

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A poem. Noncrab related

Post by Emm33333 » Wed Feb 08, 2017 4:03 pm

I felt in the writing mood so I wrote a small poem from the perspective of a secret crush. Here it is. (I did not editing whatsoever so it's really bad
As soon as I saw
I thought of a flaw
You weren't mine
Can't you take a sign?
My heart quickened
And I sickened
I realized my fantasies
Were other realities
I glanced and stared
But then realized you never cared,
About that boy in the corner who
His eyes immediately glue to you
I'm the guy in the sweatshirt, hidden
From you, because you are forbidden
My story is unwritten
May the plot thicken
As I listen to your soft voice
As I am toss to the side
My stomach caves in
And my skin in filled with pins
As I realize you'll never be mine....
From Emm
Happy Crabber since '16
2 PP's, CrabCakes and Odka (10g, 29g)
Soon to be owner of six adoptees and a 75g with all supplies!
Adoptees names! Bagel ( Big honkin Bagel aka BHB) Cece,Ebony,Mitzi,Rocco and Gwin

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Re: A poem. Noncrab related

Post by HeyItsEggs » Sat Feb 11, 2017 6:27 pm

I LOVE IT!
I am guessing when you talk in the perspective of the boy you're talking as the crush?
Sophia aka "Eggs"
Four PPs, Rio, Rolo, Curlz and Malibu in a 40 gallon
May they rest in peace- Mango- 1/13/17 and Stefanio- 1/10/17

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Re: A poem. Noncrab related

Post by GotButterflies » Sat Feb 11, 2017 9:55 pm

Good job Emm
Truly blessed to have incredible creatures, wonderful friends and my amazing family in my life!! I'm very thankful & grateful for all of them! www.thehealthyhermit.com

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