HCA: Hermit Crab Association

Currently our business cards say:


CRAB CARE TIPS
Cage temperature 72-78°
Cage Humidity 70-80%
Dechlorinated drinking water only
Feed fresh wholesome foods only
Provide empty shells and
Never own just one (they get lonely)!

I was questioned by a person i gave one to, they asked if the crabs need salt water why does the card say decholrinated drinking water only? I explained that it means not to use tap water but i was thinking if the card said this it might be better:

CRAB CARE TIPS
Cage temperature 72-78°
Cage Humidity 70-80%
Dechlorinated drinking water and Sea Salt water made with dechlorinated water are needed by all Hermit crabs
Feed fresh wholesome foods only
Provide empty shells and
Never own just one (they get lonely)!

It fits, what does everyone else think?

I think it's shortened so that the basics can actually fit on the card and be readable.
When you give them out, maybe just mention it and/or write it down on the card.

it fits when i typed it out on the card, i just didnt know how anyone felt about me making a change to the ones i give out. It all fits fine. Im just afraid of someone taking it to pass on and the information getting misunderstand. I can see after it was pointed out why she thought i was wrong about needing salt water.

I think something about painted shells could be added to.

Actually "Just say No to unhealthy Painted Shells!" would fit on the Front of the card!

* Moved by OIF_VET.
This should have been posted here I Believe instead of Activism.
Thank you

Sorry i figured out giving out the cards was part of activism so i posted it there.